Image 1: reworked image
Image 2: original submission for assignment 1
As I have only just finished putting the top one together I will probably need to leave it for a few days to consider its merits. I will also not elaborate on the concept either for now or my preferences.
I have thoroughly enjoyed having a go at this, even though it took hours and hours, and my eyes are raw from dryness...I must forget to blink when I'm concentrating!!
Anyway, I will come back to this soon and welcome your views in the meantime.