Given the need at assessment to demonstrate how you have responded to feedback, this conversation needs to be noted on here. I am reluctant to repeat it all pigeon style as it really is directed at my work, not that relevant for anyone else and what is more important is how I respond to his advice, not regurgitating it. Over the coming months my enquiries will be posted on here in which I'll relate back to conversations had.
Evidence of notes from the conversation,
but impossible to read or understand probably for anyone but me!!
One thing that I keep being reminded of, is that there really is no short-cut to producing good work...because it shows if you do...you have to read, you have to write, you have to do the research and you have to be absolutely clear what you are trying to achieve...and then of course you have to make a convincing photograph or two! And whilst I'm not afraid of hard work, I am aware the work becomes more extensive and intensive all the time...you never 'arrive'...and I find myself seeking refreshment breaks or 'pick-me-ups' to feed my hurting brain along the way, just to get through some of the hard miles, otherwise the distance to travel can feel unmanageable.